Out Of The Wild: An Alaskan's Adventure To Find America
My name is John. I was born and raised in Alaska. I have been hearing how the American Dream is no longer possible for my generation; how the pursuit of a college education will leave my peers and me in crippling debt; and America is no longer the beacon of hope it once was. Too many of my generation believe what they are hearing. I am not going to surrender to such news.
Using my bicycle, a tent, and a camera I will tell this story in a documentary I call “Finding My America”. I will begin in my hometown of Kodiak, Alaska on May 22, 2012. I am partnering with small businesses that will sponsor this trip. I am working with many Subway restaurant owners who are sponsoring me in exchange for a commercial I will make and post on the Internet.
2 comments:
Hi John. It's an incredible thing you are doing and I'm enjoying following you. I'm also a Full Sail Student, working on my Master's for New Online Journalism. I have a few thoughts for your introduction. Start with what inspired you to embark on such an extraordinary undertaking - biking across America. From what I've read, I have a glimps of why you are doing it - "Finding Your America" and wanting to show people that following the American dream is alive and well. But I still don't know what inspired this tour...What were you doing or what was happening when this idea came to you? What research did you do? Who did you talk to about if this bike tour was a good idea? Things like that is what your readers want to know. They want to know you and what makes you tick...Hope this helps to spark some ideas for your introduction.
Hi John,
In addition to what I already wrote for introduction ideas, I also want to mention that if you cover the 5 W's & H (Who, What, When, Where, Why and How) in your introduction, you will have a powerful start to your documentary.
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